Of the poets whose work we considered, I found Jackson Mac Low clever but not really to my taste; the Mary Cornish poem "Numbers" however I loved -
"... multiplication's school
of fish times fish,
whose silver bodies breed
beneath the shadow of a boat.
Even subtraction is never loss,
just addition somewhere else;
five sparrows take away two,
the two in someone else's
garden now ..."
It's a poem well worth looking up if you're unfamiliar with it, as I was.
As with all good workshops, the morning left me with a host of ideas and possible avenues to explore, both topic and style-wise. An exercise we did, based on a Mac Low technique, produced superficially nonsensical poems that, on closer study, contained some startlingly original use of language - definite food for thought there! Significant dates, numbers of bus routes, telephone numbers, PIN numbers, passwords - our daily lives are almost constructed around these now, so they certainly offer a plethora of writing opportunities. Thank you, Hilda!
Hilda Sheehan |
It certainly was a fascinating workshop. For someone to whom numbers are a mystery - although I can add up the shopping if I don't buy too many items - I was feeling out of my depth. However once we started on the Mac Low technique something clicked and I was away. Now all I need are interesting phrases, a book, there are plenty in this house, numbers for letters of the alphabet, and lets hope for some interesting poems.
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